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Swimming by Amy1Jade2Wendy3 Swimming by Amy1Jade2Wendy3
Gahh, I worked on this like...almost the whole day...and I'm glad how it came out!^^
I'm studying on the anatomy! so please critique!(:

I btw, baught myself an iMac few days ago, and SAI doesn't work for it so the commissions might be slower! I'm trying to get it to work with parallels. Or maybe use my laptop...or just photoshop!
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It's very beautiful drawing, with nice shading and well defined pattern of fur. Water is such realistic, but it could be even better if panther would have reflection on the surface of the water. By the way, there is a little disproportion between head and other parts of body. Head (including ears) should be a little smaller than panther back loins. It should also be more oblate.

Everything else is well done, with perfect proportions. Panther movement in the water is defined by small waves around feline, which figure doesn't look like a panther stands in the water in a strange position, which is a common mistake in this type of drawings. Especially small details like eyes and nose are very refined.
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kobaltkween Jan 16, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
I think you used a very good technique on the fur, thought it's not high enough contrast to be wet. Wet hair and fur has amazingly little shading. The head and the body are both well formed on their own, but they're out of proportion to each other (the head is too large).
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Amy1Jade2Wendy3 Jan 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks! I didn't even thought of the water and the fur... So, if i draw something in the water next time, i'll remember x3
and yeah i know the head's to big....didn't notice when i was drawing...thats also a thing i'm gonna work on next!(:
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Nawiz Jan 10, 2013  Student Digital Artist
OOOhh wow, this is gogdamn prettuuu u uu u uu u uu u *-*
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Gaahh, that looks awesome, very realistic! I LOVE how the water looks.
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Amy1Jade2Wendy3 Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank youuuu!<3
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You're welcome! <3
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The-Barber Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
    Woah. I was about to start drawing a picture exactly like this but with Sweeney! xD ... But this is really good.
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Amy1Jade2Wendy3 Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
omg scary.. x3
and thanks c:
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The-Barber Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
    You're welcome xD
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